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Age: 19
Alias: The Pale Lady
Personality: She is soft spoken, calm, and nurturing. However, she tends to distance herself from the others, even more so than Daltharion.
Bio: Lunaria is a young and gifted moon maiden. In truth, she likes to train with Daltharion only, not just because he possesses lunar powers as well, but also for the fact that he’s the only one other than Aurora and Solaria who truly understands her behavior... and her dark past. She, Solaria, and Aurora are close friends. She and Shade have a budding relationship.
Role: Healer
Known abilities: Levitation, gravitational pull, tidal manipulation, moonlight, moonfire, lunar eclipse, lunar beam, renewing aura, soothing darkness.
Original home: Moon Crater Valley
Affiliated with: Chosen of the Cosmos
Element: Lunar
Favorite food: Moon fruit
Interests: Nature, Daltharion, Shade, nighttime, planetary rings, etc.
Nemesis: Chaos itself
Weapon(s) of choice: She prefers to use her lunar powers to heal her allies, and she can wield her staff, Moonreaper, to better channel her powers.... Or to simply hit her foes with.
Mount of choice: Her beloved giant moth Mosura.
Alias: The Pale Lady
Personality: She is soft spoken, calm, and nurturing. However, she tends to distance herself from the others, even more so than Daltharion.
Bio: Lunaria is a young and gifted moon maiden. In truth, she likes to train with Daltharion only, not just because he possesses lunar powers as well, but also for the fact that he’s the only one other than Aurora and Solaria who truly understands her behavior... and her dark past. She, Solaria, and Aurora are close friends. She and Shade have a budding relationship.
Role: Healer
Known abilities: Levitation, gravitational pull, tidal manipulation, moonlight, moonfire, lunar eclipse, lunar beam, renewing aura, soothing darkness.
Original home: Moon Crater Valley
Affiliated with: Chosen of the Cosmos
Element: Lunar
Favorite food: Moon fruit
Interests: Nature, Daltharion, Shade, nighttime, planetary rings, etc.
Nemesis: Chaos itself
Weapon(s) of choice: She prefers to use her lunar powers to heal her allies, and she can wield her staff, Moonreaper, to better channel her powers.... Or to simply hit her foes with.
Mount of choice: Her beloved giant moth Mosura.
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I'll be trying to give you some advice on your character, if you don't mind.
Yeah, as you can see, writing premises is not exactly my streght.
So, judging from this one and the other character bios on your profile, I conclude that you base this series of OCs on different heavenly bodies.
As a character who's based on the moon, I think this one's fairly well done, with the calm, nurturing personality perfectly fitting the cool but calming moonlight. Same with her powers based on the moon. I'm not exactly good with superpowers and weapons, though I think a staff fits pretty well. I actually only have one suggestion here: Give her healing powers! The night is used to recover from the hardships of day, something that I could see perfectly represented in her powers. Secondly, especially with a group of three or more people, a healer really helps balance things out.
Secondly, for her design. You seem to base every character you make of the same anime-base-thing, which actually makes me a little sad, as I'm a really big fan of different bodytypes and facial features (something suiting her would be a slender, delicate, yet tall form), but apart from that, again, she's based on the moon and that's very wonderfully represented through her design.
Her personality appeals to me to, I wouldn't change anything but instead ADD things. To keep her from coming off as some sort of stereotype, which she comes a little too close to the border of being, give her some unusual quirks, some hobbies and preferences that don't have to do with the moon and so on. They make your character seem more human and more believable, thus, more likeable.
P.S.: I suck at writing endings as well, so I'm just going to awkwardly end this here.
Yeah, as you can see, writing premises is not exactly my streght.
So, judging from this one and the other character bios on your profile, I conclude that you base this series of OCs on different heavenly bodies.
As a character who's based on the moon, I think this one's fairly well done, with the calm, nurturing personality perfectly fitting the cool but calming moonlight. Same with her powers based on the moon. I'm not exactly good with superpowers and weapons, though I think a staff fits pretty well. I actually only have one suggestion here: Give her healing powers! The night is used to recover from the hardships of day, something that I could see perfectly represented in her powers. Secondly, especially with a group of three or more people, a healer really helps balance things out.
Secondly, for her design. You seem to base every character you make of the same anime-base-thing, which actually makes me a little sad, as I'm a really big fan of different bodytypes and facial features (something suiting her would be a slender, delicate, yet tall form), but apart from that, again, she's based on the moon and that's very wonderfully represented through her design.
Her personality appeals to me to, I wouldn't change anything but instead ADD things. To keep her from coming off as some sort of stereotype, which she comes a little too close to the border of being, give her some unusual quirks, some hobbies and preferences that don't have to do with the moon and so on. They make your character seem more human and more believable, thus, more likeable.
P.S.: I suck at writing endings as well, so I'm just going to awkwardly end this here.